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Post by Zycor on Nov 24, 2008 13:26:33 GMT -7
I am going to try something here.
Since I am curious as to stories myself being an avid reader I want to start another writing section.
Here though the only rules that apply are the forum rules so by all means pull out your story telling skills and tell me a story.
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Post by HK-47 on Dec 3, 2008 12:04:50 GMT -7
Yes we hunger for good stories...
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Post by Zycor on Dec 4, 2008 11:14:25 GMT -7
yes... and it doesn't necessarily have to be about games since this is in general chat
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Post by Zycor on Dec 6, 2008 16:44:23 GMT -7
[glow=red,2,300]Revan![/glow] Back in grade school, you were writing a story that you had like several chapters for, you always let that sexy teacher read it, you remember the one that you had the hots for, why don't you write an excerpt of that story here?
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Post by Revan on Dec 8, 2008 16:15:16 GMT -7
Ohhhh.... you mean The Underground World series? Lol yes I remember those! Heck, I STILL have those in my 2nd grade notebook! NO JOKE! Hmm..... I was going to try to rewrite a book based on em, I even tried to in JR High but they never took off.......
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Post by Ace of Defiance on Dec 8, 2008 21:58:32 GMT -7
hey me and on of my friends made an story about war a CoD 4 inspired story staring my friends Clan SR-71 (not the air craft) the true units name was SR-471 we have many chapters and lots of back story but i'll have to talk to him ASAP to see if i can use what we wrote! and i have a few that are mine if any one is interestid... most are based off of CoD 4 like events. (not like the story but the setting like war torn citys w/Russians!) any ways i'll ask him... his name is Dev Ross by the way he is on my friends list on XBL
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Post by Zycor on Dec 9, 2008 12:32:46 GMT -7
Ohhhh.... you mean The Underground World series? Lol yes I remember those! Heck, I STILL have those in my 2nd grade notebook! NO JOKE! Hmm..... I was going to try to rewrite a book based on em, I even tried to in JR High but they never took off....... Yes....thats the one, I couldn't remember the name of it....so are ya going to write it in here? At least part of the first chapter for everyone to read? I for one would like to be able to read it again.
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Post by Zycor on Dec 9, 2008 12:33:44 GMT -7
hey me and on of my friends made an story about war a CoD 4 inspired story staring my friends Clan SR-71 (not the air craft) the true units name was SR-471 we have many chapters and lots of back story but i'll have to talk to him ASAP to see if i can use what we wrote! and i have a few that are mine if any one is interestid... most are based off of CoD 4 like events. (not like the story but the setting like war torn citys w/Russians!) any ways i'll ask him... his name is Dev Ross by the way he is on my friends list on XBL Yes by all means ask him....I would like to read it!
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Post by HK-47 on Dec 9, 2008 15:33:54 GMT -7
i require stories... write me some stories or meatbags will start dying....
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Post by Zycor on Dec 10, 2008 10:56:11 GMT -7
Hurry up Revan! Tell us a bit of that Underground World!
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Post by Ace of Defiance on Dec 10, 2008 22:19:03 GMT -7
hey i've been talking to Dev and he said it will take some time to retype his book the orbit of glass on his computer so he'll get back to me when he is finished!
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Post by Revan on Dec 14, 2008 16:10:20 GMT -7
Jeez Zycor! Ok ok! I will dig the ORIGINAL up. But a note to everyone that I wrote this in 2ND GRADE! SO DO NOT LAUGH AT ME!!!!
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Post by Zycor on Dec 15, 2008 10:42:21 GMT -7
Why would anybody laugh? If they do just ban em!
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Post by Ganondorf on Dec 19, 2008 10:04:01 GMT -7
You guys can still just put those stories on the fan fiction board, it don't really matter.
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Post by turc on Dec 21, 2008 12:52:40 GMT -7
So Ganondorf has a list of people we need to put together a game.... It starts with an idea... Perhaps from your stories we can gain an idea and then we may not have such trouble finding the people to put together this game. Ace of Defiance has more than one idea, orbit of glass? I Look forward to reading these stories... so that we can help the lil wizard Ganon adjust his negativity.
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Post by Ace of Defiance on Dec 21, 2008 18:35:53 GMT -7
well *@#$! i might as well just start a new story, because Dev is uncoopritive.... any idea's besides Ganondorks negitivity... lol anyways i can wright story boards pretty good but like i said give me an idea and ill draft it! and post it here so every one can tell me if they like it or not and what should be changed Ect... PLEASE send me ideas i want somthing we can ALL agree on!!
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Post by Ace of Defiance on Dec 21, 2008 20:40:55 GMT -7
speaking of odd things oak picture this! a snowy yet clear day its about 9:30 P.M. and there is a large bunker complex just mile north of your position, your orders are to scout the area. when you come about 1/4 a mile from the bunker every thing is dark you can just see the silhouette of the bunker just coming in your Field of view a moment later the once dark and quiet bunker explodes with Christmas lights all over and jolly music starts slowly yet eerily "Its going to be a white Christmas...." confused you look at the glowing structure and all its light bulbs wondering if you are still in a war until you hear the familiar noise of an artillery shell ripping through the air! in the hellish hail of bombs the forest around you snaps and breaks as falling glass with every explosion getting closer and the music still playing in all the chaos..... well thats all i got for now, i based that off a dream i had about an hour ago! well just about four more days until Christmas!
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Post by Zycor on Dec 22, 2008 9:46:32 GMT -7
friggin cool.....now if you don't care someone could add to that or you could add to it
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Post by Zycor on Dec 22, 2008 10:09:04 GMT -7
I got another Christmas theme...................
The cool night air settled over the small village, Santa had just made his rounds with his bagfull of toys. He thought he was finished and his sleigh rose slowly into the air preparing to head westward to the next village.
In another part of the village, a pair of small evil eyes watched the sleigh rising and a low mad chuckle emanated from the trolls hiding place, he caressed one of his favorite weapons, a razor sharp stiletto, in anticipation of the bloodbath about to begin.
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Post by Zycor on Dec 22, 2008 13:22:48 GMT -7
A low growl could be heard nearby, the troll cocked his head and listened to the irritating noise, his eyes searched the area and fell upon the corner of the house. 'Chickenshit', he thought. Softly he moved to a trellis next to the house and climbed to the roof. Moving across the roof silently he peered over the edge where the growling came from. A mongrel crouched by the corner of the house getting ready to spring at anyone stupid to come around the corner. The troll sheathed his stilletto and dropped off of the roof onto his prey, his weight knocking the mongrel to the ground, before the mongrel could react the troll had drew his stilletto and stabbed, the blade slicing over and over through the air finding its home each time. The mongrels growls of rage soon became silent whimpers and then nothing. The stilletto flashed once more gutting the mongrel and the trolls head buried itself into the carcas and he drank deeply of the warm blood. His thirst filled he leaned back on his haunches, his blood smeared face looked up into the sky, for some reason that he could not explain he filled his lungs with air and howled, liking the sounds of it he howled again. Wiping his knife off he sheathed it once more and rose onto his feet and disappeared into the darkness leaving the mongel to bleed out in the street!
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Post by Zycor on Dec 23, 2008 12:54:49 GMT -7
Unbeknownst to the evil Troll, who was in search of far greater prey than a mere mongrel, he was about to clash with one of the greatest heroes of all time.
Santa, who was far ahead of schedule and was flying along at a leisurely pace was a few miles out of his next stop, he began rummaging in his sack and setting out toys and stuff for the next village, he came across a small doll and thumped his head in disbelief. ' How could he have forgotten to give this to Meg?' Now he would have to go back.
He grabbed the reins and turned his reindeer around, with a small whistle and a flick of the wrist, the reindeer surged forward picking up speed!
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Post by Xombi on Dec 24, 2008 9:16:08 GMT -7
i have a few books i can post (since none of them were ever published ( d**n you scholastic thinking that repetitive slaying was too gory for 12 year olds, hell i was playing manhunt at 12 (i think- maby it was simthing else like fatal frame or somthing))) but anyway since i cant post them in Fan Faction sice they are exesivly violent i shalt post them here- Hope you enjoy gory enough storys that it splatters on th inside of your computer screen ( btw if you think my stories are gory you should have seen some of my comics from the 7th grade lolrcoptr)
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Post by Zycor on Dec 24, 2008 11:19:58 GMT -7
Dude....that would be cool, the gorier the better, the inside of me computer screen needs redecorating anyway!
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Post by Revan on Dec 24, 2008 11:56:54 GMT -7
*A Christmas to remember*
"Merry Christmas"
Those words rang in his head, could it be Christmas already? How long had they been fighting? Just that morning they had had a small celebration at base, some dancing, christmas lights, the whole works, hell, they even were served real turkey and potatoes! Private Harold gripped his rifle harder and shook his head in disbelief, so much fighting, so much blood. He sat behind a wall of sandbags, not daring to look around the corner.
The bodies of his squad lay around him in ruins, blood covered the ground, their sightless eyes stared up to the hazy morning sky. They had been ambushed, artilery followed by a spread of gunfire, he was the only one left now.
Every few seconds another burst of gunfire would follow, ripping the ground and sandbags. Harold fought back tears as he felt his heart pounding inside his chest, he tried to push his fear down, he didnt want to die. Not like this, not on Christmas, half-sobbing he reached inside of his shirt pocket and with shakey hands drew out a worn picture, he smiled, His wife Elizabeth and two year old daughter Marly. Sat posed in front of a Christmas tree, both beaming. That was last years Christmas, he had been allowed to take a week leave to see them.
"What will happen now?" He thought, how will Marly grow up without a dad? Would his wife remarry? Will she ever know what happened to him? "Oh God please no" he thought, "please let my body be found" he couldnt bear the thought of his wife, still hoping that he was alive out there somewere. He could hear shouts from the enemy now, to check and make sure the fallen were dead, he went pale with fear, there was no hidding, no were to run.
Now he did start to sob, Why was he out here? Why did he have to die? Why couldnt he be like the rest of his family back home, warm and comfortable, sharing Christmas with loved ones? He imagined what it was like at that moment at his house, the family over, all talking to Elizabeth, telling her that he would walk in the door any minute, and then telling her that he was there with love more than anything. She would put aside his presents, in a corner under the tree, she would not take the tree down until he came home, his presents would go untouched.
He heard footsteps now, crunching on the snow, the shouts of men closer, he heard a moan, followed by a gunshot, fresh tears sprang to his eyes, "Why?" he thought, he looked down and closed his eyes, waiting to die. But then he reliezed something, Why was he here? Why was he about to die? He was there for the one thing he didnt think about, Christmas. He was here, so that his family, Elizabeth, Marly. Could have a Christmas, he was fighting for them, for their freedom, for their happiness.
He cried then, his body shaking. He cried openly, not holding it in, he heard a shout, someone had heard him, Private Harold looked to the sky then, he looked up to the sky, and thanked God for his family, for the wonderful times he had spent in his life, he prayed for a better life for his family, and that they would be takin care of. He was being shouted at now, they were telling him to surrender, he heard a few approaching. Private Harold took three deep shaky breaths, gripped his rifle, the picture of his family clutched between the stock and his hand, and spoke in a whisper, "For you, my love."
Private Harold rushed around the corner.
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Post by Zycor on Dec 24, 2008 12:22:57 GMT -7
OMFG Revan....ya finally wrote a story, I knew ya could do it, I love the it!
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Post by Revan on Dec 24, 2008 12:26:27 GMT -7
lol why thank you! And I am actually digging for The Underground World now as I type!
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Post by Zycor on Dec 24, 2008 12:29:39 GMT -7
get it posted man...get it posted
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Post by Revan on Dec 24, 2008 12:42:20 GMT -7
I have finally found it! THE UNDERGROUND WORLD I wrote this in 2nd grade and changed it around in 4th so DON’T MAKE FUN OF ME!
Faraway (The Original, made in 2nd grade) *Note: Punctuation is horrible, I have kept it in the original format.
I went in the woods. I saw a cave. I saw a wolf and I ran in the cave. I fale (fell) down a hole. I was in an Underground World!
I saw a running tree and said “Why are you running?” The tree said “The Underground Monster is caming!(coming) He will eat you.”
The Monster ran after me. I ran. The Monster ran faster. I ran into a hole in a tree. Then the Manster (monster) ran paste me. I saw a person. She was running into a building so I fuled (followed) her.
The pusing (person) was tiching (teaching) a class. I said What is your name?” She said “my name is Ms. Gange.
I said “Will you help me get out of this world?”
She said “yes” and she took me to a hole and said “Jump in and you will be back to your World.”
I said “bye” and I jumped in and I was back at my house.
The End
I actually have a sequel to this (also a 2nd grade edition) that I will post later, and then I will post my 4th grade remake, I also tried a 6th and 7th grade remake but I only have a few chapters which I will post. Thanks for reading!
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Post by turc on Dec 24, 2008 16:19:18 GMT -7
Bring on the gore, Ace, WTF! Great stories ALL! I think Revan's second grade experience was in real time and he just thinks he's home. Check your family, Rev make sure they haven't been snatched. LOL...
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Post by HK-47 on Dec 25, 2008 1:53:29 GMT -7
very good stuff revan ^^ keep up the good work or meatbags start dying >.>
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